Cute poem.
But the first stanza kind falls apart at the end, especially in my worldview.
The second stanza sounds like something inspired by the Crusades.
There will always have to be I, as in this world, to survive we must look after ourself. In many ways that does not have to be centred on I though. As we are motivated to look after self so we are fit and healthy to look after others.
The world has become very I without knowing it and I am of the Generation that are the bigeest culprits. The western world built materialism as a goal and that is all about selfish aims. A big house, a few cars, the boat and holiday house, all the while half the world starves.
So the only crusade I see is in Bahai Mind is that of the union of all peoples, not by force, but by fostering the common good we all have within.
Regards Tony