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You... (by me. :D)

blackout

Violet.
You...

You... I Love...
You know me,
You reach deep inside
and console me...
you fill me up...
you make me laugh
...from so many miles away.

You... I See...
In the eye of my mind,
and we're so happy there
even when we're sad
you fill me up...
I make you laugh
...and there's no staying mad.


You... and I....
We're so much better...
together...
than we ever were...
otherwise...
(than we ever were...
otherwise...)
You… and I…
We’re so much better
together...
than maybe we ever were,
when that something,
...that someone...
we needed so badly,
... was nowhere to be found.


You... Play me...
like fingers on ivory
in the darkness of my room.
In the warp and the weave
I hear your voice
in the casting of the spell,
... and I wrap you in my charms.

You... I Want...
Oh how I ache for you
Oh how I want you
So deep inside me...
So Completely.
I know your heart and your mind,
but what I need now...
...Is the heat
of your hands and your lips...
...On the sweet
of my mouth and my hips…


You… and Me…
It seems we were meant to be,
but some others won’t agree.
And We both know...
as far as we've come
there's still so far to go...
(interlude)
And the getting here...
Won’t be easy.

But
You…
from A Thousand Miles away,
make me
Better than I am…
Than I’ve ever been,
and maybe I’ll ever be…
(You complete me)

And
I… I know, I make you
Better than you are…
Than you’ve ever been,
and maybe you’ll ever be…
(Can you go it without me?)

Baby,
You… You make me
Better than I am…
Than I’ve ever been,

and maybe I’ll ever be…
 
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blackout

Violet.
I wrote this tonight.
I rarely write love songs,
(sometimes erotic poetry ;) )
but alas,
I AM actually in love.
So anyway,
at least,
it is the genuine article.

Aparantely Love Trumps Writer's Block.
But then I already knew that.
 
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joea

Oshoyoi
Your frubels coming tomorrow....I've been too generous today. Given out my limit for the day
 
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blackout

Violet.
Well....
It's not my best work,
however it does express
what I was wanting to put down.
I think it tells the story.

I like this part the most.

You... Play me...

like fingers on ivory

in the darkness of my room.
In the warp and the weave
I hear your voice
in the casting of the spell,
... and I wrap you in my charms.

also this...

You... I Want...

Oh how I ache for you

Oh how I want you
So deep inside me...
So Completely.
I know your heart and your mind,
but what I need now...
...Is the heat
of your hands and your lips...
...On the sweet
of my mouth and my hips…


If the whole thing were that good...
I would most likely work it out at the piano. :)
 
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