@Octavia156
The problem with this is that AL encourages thelemites to fight as kings and brothers, like chess. Crowley's comment contradicts this. As for the poetry, whether there was an "insert here" or not, the speakers say, repeatedly, not to change or add anything - a strange oversight. Other examples include the insertion of straight golden dawn ideology, such as I:49. It strips individuality from practitioners because they only have one external source - Crowley. This is like only having one scientific journal that's considered reliable and is owned by creationists.
The Set-Horus current, Aiwass as a Sumerian god, and all that is in Equinox of the Gods, as far as I remember. You're probably more well versed than I. Further, Set is called a twin to Horus, and Set plays a central role in the Gnostic mass. How is all this addressed?