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Whose to blame?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RayofLight, Apr 23, 2021.

  1. RayofLight

    RayofLight They/Them

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    Trigger warning: suicide.
    Title: Whose to blame?
    Did you listen?
    Did you even care?
    When she said
    She wanted to end her life?
    Now she lies
    A shell in a casket.
    You said all she sought was attention.
    Didn't look to see her eyes
    Were dead inside
    She said

    Hey would anyone care?
    If I died tonight...
    The world would still turn.
    Dont you worry
    I'll be at peace
    Finally rest this weary head
    Death would be so bliss

    Oh the way you treated her
    To make her disappear.
    Always having to hide
    Behind that smile.
    Secrets all around
    Yet you said:

    All she wants is attention.
    She is just pretending...
    Please she won't actually do it.
    No she's not that stupid,
    Surely she cant be depressed?
    Shes too young
    Life aint begun
    To mess with her.

    And she just decided it
    No one cared.
    So she grabbed those pills
    And overdosed.
    Well
    Are you happy now?
    You couldve saved her
    But it's too late.
    What have you to say?
    As guilt fills you...
    As she is lowered into the ground...
     
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  2. Hermit Philosopher

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    Hello, my friend
    Would you like to talk...?
     
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  3. RayofLight

    RayofLight They/Them

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    I am ok dont worry...i usually write depressing stuff.
     
  4. Hermit Philosopher

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    Your words speak of suffering. The suffering of not having your emotions acknowledged, or perhaps even rendered invalid/irrelevant.

    There is nothing irrelevant about suffering. You must remember that. Suffering shall not be rated; all suffering feels the same. And that is okay.

    Sending you strength.


    Humbly
    Hermit
     
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  5. RayofLight

    RayofLight They/Them

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    Thanks? I think...all I wanted was to write some poetry... Perhaps past pain helps inspire it... But I don't think currently I am suffering much.
     
  6. Hermit Philosopher

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    Very glad to hear that RayofLight!
    You just write away then :).


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  7. RayofLight

    RayofLight They/Them

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    Just know for future reference...my poems tend to get real dark real quick...doesnt mean currently I am in pain altho sometimes it does. I just write what I feel inspired to write
     
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