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Whose to blame?

VoidCat

Pronouns: he/him/they/them
Trigger warning: suicide.
Title: Whose to blame?
Did you listen?
Did you even care?
When she said
She wanted to end her life?
Now she lies
A shell in a casket.
You said all she sought was attention.
Didn't look to see her eyes
Were dead inside
She said

Hey would anyone care?
If I died tonight...
The world would still turn.
Dont you worry
I'll be at peace
Finally rest this weary head
Death would be so bliss

Oh the way you treated her
To make her disappear.
Always having to hide
Behind that smile.
Secrets all around
Yet you said:

All she wants is attention.
She is just pretending...
Please she won't actually do it.
No she's not that stupid,
Surely she cant be depressed?
Shes too young
Life aint begun
To mess with her.

And she just decided it
No one cared.
So she grabbed those pills
And overdosed.
Well
Are you happy now?
You couldve saved her
But it's too late.
What have you to say?
As guilt fills you...
As she is lowered into the ground...
 
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Hermit Philosopher

Selflessly here for you
Trigger warning: suicide.
Title: Whose to blame?
Did you listen?
Did you even care?
When she said
She wanted to end her life?
Now she lies
A shell in a casket.
You said all she sought was attention.
Didn't look to see her eyes
Were dead inside
She said

Hey would anyone care?
If I died tonight...
The world would still turn.
Dont you worry
I'll be at peace
Finally rest this weary head
Death would be so bliss

Oh the way you treated her
To make her disappear.
Always having to hide
Behind that smile.
Secrets all around
Yet you said:

All she wants is attention.
She is just pretending...
Please she won't actually do it.
No she's not that stupid,
Surely she cant be depressed?
She too young
Life aint begun
To mess with her.

And she just decided it
No one cared.
So she grabbed those pills
And overdosed.
Well
Are you happy now?
You couldve saved her
But it's too late.
What have you to say?
As guilt fills you...
As she is lowered into the ground...


Hello, my friend
Would you like to talk...?
 

Hermit Philosopher

Selflessly here for you
I am ok dont worry...i usually write depressing stuff.


Your words speak of suffering. The suffering of not having your emotions acknowledged, or perhaps even rendered invalid/irrelevant.

There is nothing irrelevant about suffering. You must remember that. Suffering shall not be rated; all suffering feels the same. And that is okay.

Sending you strength.


Humbly
Hermit
 

VoidCat

Pronouns: he/him/they/them
Your words speak of suffering. The suffering of not having your emotions acknowledged, or perhaps even rendered invalid/irrelevant.

There is nothing irrelevant about suffering. You must remember that. Suffering shall not be rated; all suffering feels the same. And that is okay.

Sending you strength.


Humbly
Hermit
Thanks? I think...all I wanted was to write some poetry... Perhaps past pain helps inspire it... But I don't think currently I am suffering much.
 
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