My Poem

[glasgowchick]

Hi all, just thought I would share with you one of my many talents My poetry LOL !!!!!!...It was the first one I got published

....Sometimes
sometimes i wonder how did this all start
sometimes i wonder why you broke my heart
sometimes i feel my lifes at a halt
the tears that i cried where you worth their salt,,
sometimes i wonder when i lay in bed
sometimes i wonder and wish i were dead,,
sometimes i wonder was this all real
do you know how laugh how to cry how to feel
sometimes i wonder where your at now
did i ever hurt you,tell me why when and how
sometimes i wonder why you wont come clean
sometimes i wonder why you treat me so mean
sometimes i wonder why its you that i miss
the warmth of your smile and your tender kiss
sometimes i wonder will the hurt ever die
sometimes i wonder why you leave me to cry
sometimes i wonder why my lifes in a mess,,
is it because i still love you,
then my answer is yes,

Jacqueline Griffin

Copyright ©2005 Jacqueline Griffin​

 

[glasgowchick]

This was dedicated to my friend's baby who was stillborn...

Still Yet Born
in memory of baby john

As I look down from heaven
this is what I see
i see all your sadness
and its all because of me
As I look down from heaven
i see a place where you stand
a lock of my hair you cup in your hand
As I look down from heaven
you could never have known
the love you sent to me
in the place i was growing
As I look down from heaven
i will never forget
the lullabyes sang to me
though we hadnt met
As I look down from heaven
I need you to know
mummy you are the best, hear what I say for its just for a while
but for now its in Gods arms I rest.


Jacqueline Griffin

Copyright ©2005 Jacqueline Griffin​

 

[Terrywoodenpic]

This was dedicated to my friend's baby who was stillborn...

Still Yet Born
in memory of baby john

As I look down from heaven
this is what I see
i see all your sadness
and its all because of me
As I look down from heaven
i see a place where you stand
a lock of my hair you cup in your hand
As I look down from heaven
you could never have known
the love you sent to me
in the place i was growing
As I look down from heaven
i will never forget
the lullabyes sang to me
though we hadnt met
As I look down from heaven
I need you to know
mummy you are the best, hear what I say for its just for a while
but for now its in Gods arms I rest.


Jacqueline Griffin

Copyright ©2005 Jacqueline Griffin​

Beautiful
Had me really tearful

Terry__________________________
Blessed are the pure of heart, they shall behold their God.

 

[glasgowchick]

Thankyou Terry, when my friend lost her son, the hospital gave her a lock of his hair, also his photo and foot and hand prints, I put everything together for her in a frame which she cherishes...It was so sad for her...

 

[Pussyfoot Mouse]

That really touched my heart. Very lovely! Well done!

 

[michel]

They were both wonderfully touching, Jackie; the second one brought a tear or two, as Terry said. You write beautifully.

 

[glasgowchick]

AWWWWW, Thankyou all for your kind words..

 

[Hope]

Lovely writing! Out of curiosity, where did you have your poems published?

 

[glasgowchick]

Lovely writing! Out of curiosity, where did you have your poems published?

Hi Hope and thankyou, They were published over in America, I entered a poetry contest on line, I also got one published in London..I never did buy the books that they were to appear so I would have to back on line to get the names of the book...If you would like to enter the compeition its poetry.com

 

[Scuba Pete]

Wow... both expose your soul so exquisitely!

 

[glasgowchick]

Wow... both expose your soul so exquisitely!

Thanks netdoc, they certainly were from my heart...