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Madness

Geoff-Allen

Resident megalomaniac
The voices in my head tell me I'm insane
There must be something seriously wrong with my brain
I have so much more that I need to explain
Everything seems to go against the grain
 

sun rise

The world is on fire
Premium Member
I've not been in a poetry mood recently, but in 2013 I wrote the following in response to a poetry prompt. If it shows anything, it shows how easy it is for me to unhinge my mind! The prompt: Write a poem about someone's last day in a mental hospital after they are deemed "well" enough to reenter society, try and put yourself in their shoes.

Two words of note:

antiscians: The inhabitants of the earth, living on different sides of the equator, whose shadows at noon are cast in opposite directions.

serpent: is also a musical instrument also called a contrabass anaconda

Insanely Free


It's batty uppity
time.

Everyone is strange.
I am a turnip.

The walls talk to me.
I churn no answer:
I scream with Ginger.

You are all against me
tenors
an aria
that I'm somebody special.

We're antiscians
whispers my lustful lover computer,
Betsy.

The voices tell me
I will be released:

"We have patiently
the examined
and will sanely release
the lever arm chair
into the wall."

I am myself.
Where is freedom?

I leave normal school
serpent tootelage
and enter
defiled mild child wild.

I blame the tame lame game.
I build hotels on Park Place Mat
planting a jail free exit bush.

Tomorrow the trees
will be friendly money lenders.

I'll spy huggable
waggle-taled poems
on the superb highway.

But those
saber-toothed orange versus
want me for munch.

Soon Dawn
will break my hart.

My destruction
will be en pointe.

Time to set sail
in my bed
to the old new world
in rocket's angry red glare
tomorrow good night.
 

Geoff-Allen

Resident megalomaniac
I've not been in a poetry mood recently, but in 2013 I wrote the following in response to a poetry prompt. If it shows anything, it shows how easy it is for me to unhinge my mind! The prompt: Write a poem about someone's last day in a mental hospital after they are deemed "well" enough to reenter society, try and put yourself in their shoes.

Thanks!

You are almost as demented as me - keep it up!

:)
 

DavidFirth

Well-Known Member
The lunatic is on the grass
The lunatic is on the grass
Remembering games and daisy chains and laughs
Got to keep the loonies on the path
The lunatic is in the hall
The lunatics are in my hall
The paper holds their folded faces to the floor
And every day the paper boy brings more
And if the dam breaks open many years too soon
And if there is no room upon the hill
And if your head explodes with dark forbodings too
I'll see you on the dark side of the moon
The lunatic is in my head
The lunatic is in my head
You raise the blade, you make the change
You re-arrange me 'till I'm sane
You lock the door
And throw away the key
There's someone in my head but it's not me.
And if the cloud bursts, thunder in your ear
You shout and no one seems to hear
And if the band you're in starts playing different tunes
I'll see you on the dark side of the moon

"I can't think of anything to say except...
I think it's marvellous! HaHaHa!"

--Pink Floyd from Dark Side of the Moon
 

DavidFirth

Well-Known Member
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Geoff-Allen

Resident megalomaniac
Insanely Free

It's batty uppity
time.

Everyone is strange.
I am a turnip.

The walls talk to me.
I churn no answer:
I scream with Ginger.

You are all against me
tenors
an aria
that I'm somebody special.

We're antiscians
whispers my lustful lover computer,
Betsy.

The voices tell me
I will be released:

"We have patiently
the examined
and will sanely release
the lever arm chair
into the wall."

I am myself.
Where is freedom?

I leave normal school
serpent tootelage
and enter
defiled mild child wild.

I blame the tame lame game.
I build hotels on Park Place Mat
planting a jail free exit bush.

Tomorrow the trees
will be friendly money lenders.

I'll spy huggable
waggle-taled poems
on the superb highway.

But those
saber-toothed orange versus
want me for munch.

Soon Dawn
will break my hart.

My destruction
will be en pointe.

Time to set sail
in my bed
to the old new world
in rocket's angry red glare
tomorrow good night.

Love the way your mind works!

:)
 
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