Intro - What do you think?

[The Sum of Awe]

"I wasn't born in this world. Sure, I was born on this Earth, but this world is not at all the same anymore. The corruption, the evil, and the angry have shaped us in a way that we weren't meant to be. From this I learned that peace will never last when there is more than one peace. The philosophy of peace is responsible for wars and murders, and it is what made the world what it is today. As I stand on the remnants of our past, I contemplate whether the mechanic for this broken world will ever come. Perhaps the mechanic intended to come, but now they look down at this destruction and realize it is beyond fixing. We are now the forgotten children left alone in the dark, we are the error in the code. We were created in God's image, but I'm not certain to what degree. I can only hope that God will learn from his mistakes, unlike us."

"Document Apocalypse"

 

[Ablaze]

"I wasn't born in this world. Sure, I was born on this Earth, but this world is not at all the same anymore. The corruption, the evil, and the angry have shaped us in a way that we weren't meant to be. From this I learned that peace will never last when there is more than one peace. The philosophy of peace is responsible for wars and murders, and it is what made the world what it is today. As I stand on the remnants of our past, I contemplate whether the mechanic for this broken ___ will ever come. Perhaps the mechanic intended to come, but now they look down at this destruction and realize it is beyond fixing. We are now the forgotten children left alone in the dark, we are the error in the code. We were created in God's image, but I'm not certain to what degree. I can only hope that God will learn from his mistakes, unlike us."

"Document Apocalypse"

Well-written. It sets an ominous tone and leaves me wanting more. See small edits above in red. ^

Will there be further installments?

 

[The Sum of Awe]

Thanks. There may be if anyone is interested.

Also thanks for the edits, much appreciated