Use the quote button for future reference so we can know for sure who you're talking to.
I read in the story of Adam and Eve the hard journey of adolescence, or just a general loss of innocence.
Of course, that was just one of my points. Are you going to attempt to address the other?
The narrative point? Not much to address there. If it's a story, it's a story and I have no problem with that. I was only referring to the part written as narrative. I apologize for not being specific enough.