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The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread (Instructions in poll)

Instructions for Pseudo-Haiku

  • I begin with:

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  • will keep the doctor away (7 syllables)

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  • you begin with:

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  • verbal supplement

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  • Total voters
    4

crossfire

LHP Mercuræn Feminist Heretic ☿
Premium Member
Why not just kill it?
seven years bad luck avenged
monster in mirror
 

Brickjectivity

wind and rain touch not this brain
Staff member
Premium Member
and made just for you
when the brain is full of stuff
some words might fall out
 

The Anointed

Well-Known Member
And minds fill with doubt
As the listener listens
To words that fell out

The hot barren earth
Drinks of the falling dew drops
Which are of no worth

With the rising sun
The dew drops steam and shrival
And then they are gone

The man prays for rain
His dehydrated body
Praying, waits in vain

The dried bones--bleached white
Strewn round the dry water hole
Glow in the moonlight

They rattle and walk
To the man whose swollen tongue
Cannot scream or talk

They sing songs of death
Soothing the soul of he who
Longs for his last breath

The hot sun awakes
The crows from the branch above
Feed by a dry lake..
 

dybmh

דניאל יוסף בן מאיר הירש
better a warm heart
cold oatmeal is not for me
say hi, not good-bye
 

The Anointed

Well-Known Member
Say Hi not good-bye
To the seasons that pass by
For they will return


The air that I breathe
Carries blossoms from the trees
And that makes me sneeze

And just like the rose
Whose red colour in spring glows
Likewise does my nose


Flowers die in spring
And the birds no longer sing
Death has spread his wings

Fly to me my friend
Envelope me with your wings
Take me to pain's end

And then will I be
One with all eternity
Life's great escapee
 

Brickjectivity

wind and rain touch not this brain
Staff member
Premium Member
Life's great escapee
as if life were a prison
and not a cookie

and not a cookie
no cookies for you big blue
we ate the cookies

we ate the cookies
we were so cookie angry
there ain't no cookies
 

dybmh

דניאל יוסף בן מאיר הירש
there ain't no cookies
only bananas today
money no good here
 

The Anointed

Well-Known Member
There aint no cookies
For little child like sookies
So stop complaining

Walking down the street
Complaining about my shoes
Met bloke with no feet.
 
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