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Short poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by KAT-KAT, Sep 28, 2020.

  1. KAT-KAT

    KAT-KAT Well-Known Member

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    Semi dedicated to multiple people in the long twists and turns that is life:

    I didn't realize what I had.
    And now it makes me sad.
    I couldn't fill in the missing pieces.
    To form a full picture of what could have been.
    I guess love ceases.
    And that was back then.

    I just wanted you to know, that I still care, I still think.
    Hopefully I can love someone else.
    That there's someone, somewhere, who I can be with.
    And the ship doesn't sink.
    But life isn't all rings. Rings of a bell.
    When you take a shot, sometimes you miss.

    :partlysunny:

     
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  2. Eyes to See

    Eyes to See Active Member

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    It's melancholic, I guess. I've learned that you can make love last. You have got to communicate well, spend time together alone regularly, and always forgive.

    There are those that are so wrapped up with themselves or the pursuit of material possessions, fame, power, and what not. that they forget, or perhaps never even learn, the priceless things in life are things money cannot buy.
     
  3. lewisnotmiller

    lewisnotmiller Grand Hat
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    This.

    And I agree on making love last, but I would say that my expectations of 'love' and how some other people honestly see it are quite different. I'm not the 'burn white hot' type, I much prefer someone to share a life with, with all that entails.
     
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