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Rock bottom...

gnomon

Well-Known Member
I found the bottom...

It's empty.

No rock but it was always a stupid metaphor.

But whatever:

Where is the hope upon a wilted flower

Time keeps the clock

And the flower wilts.....

I try so hard to stand up

But there is the clock

Checking off my time....

And my time feels like it's wilting

I look in your eyes

And time stops.

Existence stands still while I look in your eyes

The flower is there

As long as I see you and you see me

Time can move forward

And the flower will blossom.

Coda. The bottom is empty.

But the truth is that I will be inside you

As you encompass me this night...

And still there is no bottom......

Bottom......

Such a funny word.......

Bottom.....

Yet every deviant seeks it.

Wait. What? This was a poem?

I thought it was a fourth step.

Or a new adventure.

Figure it out for yourself.

I'm just too damn tired.
 

Electra

Active Member
what is a bottom
if I say my bottom
does that mean the bottom on my body
or the bottom of my body
why isn't our feet called our bottom

time ticks slowly in the hull

onward I say
 

Tmac

Active Member
I found the bottom...

It's empty.

No rock but it was always a stupid metaphor.

But whatever:

Where is the hope upon a wilted flower

Time keeps the clock

And the flower wilts.....

I try so hard to stand up

But there is the clock

Checking off my time....

And my time feels like it's wilting

I look in your eyes

And time stops.

Existence stands still while I look in your eyes

The flower is there

As long as I see you and you see me

Time can move forward

And the flower will blossom.

Coda. The bottom is empty.

But the truth is that I will be inside you

As you encompass me this night...

And still there is no bottom......

Bottom......

Such a funny word.......

Bottom.....

Yet every deviant seeks it.

Wait. What? This was a poem?

I thought it was a fourth step.

Or a new adventure.

Figure it out for yourself.

I'm just too damn tired.

Talk about poetic license, "it's empty" and then you proceed to fill the emptiness. Every deviant seeks it, I wonder how you know this?
 

gnomon

Well-Known Member
Talk about poetic license, "it's empty" and then you proceed to fill the emptiness. Every deviant seeks it, I wonder how you know this?

Because I'm deviant?

You did not know this?

Welcome! Newcomer!
 
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