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Rescued

Lekatt

Member
Premium Member
Rescued

I was hopeless, and could not be seen,
darkness swirled in shades of midnight green,
shattered, unable to make a sound,
I lay broken on the cold dark ground.

Someone had taught me all about you,
but I never really thought it true.
I was just too busy to believe,
to hurried to ask for a reprieve.

Then heard a soft voice, in kind words say,
“may I offer you my hand today.”
A lucent hand reached down for mine,
painfully I raised my hand to thine.

On the touch, a rush of healing light,
flowed through my body, lighting up the night.
Waves of brilliance covered my tortured soul
His compassionate love making me whole.
 

Laika

Well-Known Member
Premium Member
Rescued

I was hopeless, and could not be seen,
darkness swirled in shades of midnight green,
shattered, unable to make a sound,
I lay broken on the cold dark ground.

Someone had taught me all about you,
but I never really thought it true.
I was just too busy to believe,
to hurried to ask for a reprieve.

Then heard a soft voice, in kind words say,
“may I offer you my hand today.”
A lucent hand reached down for mine,
painfully I raised my hand to thine.

On the touch, a rush of healing light,
flowed through my body, lighting up the night.
Waves of brilliance covered my tortured soul
His compassionate love making me whole.

Thanks for sharing your poem and welcome to the forum. I hope you will like it here. :)
 
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