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Poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Rival, Mar 20, 2017.

  1. Rival

    Rival Noachide Fundamentalist Pro-Semite
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    My heart is not well; it beats a death march
    Paved with good intentions;
    Inside too sick to mention, an impurity
    That it won’t expel.
    And I sigh.

    My dreams dream of him; eyes open eyes shut
    I see that he is there,
    And I wake up to despair, I’m running a race
    That I cannot win.
    So I weep.

    Though sick I may be, sickness can be healed
    And hearts’ desires changed;
    Thoughts needn’t be disarranged, amusing themselves
    In mad fantasy.
    Thus I pray.

    Mercy, have mercy; I’ve no choice in love,
    Help me rise from this fall;
    This wasn’t my will at all, so I only ask
    That you forgive me!
    Ah, he laughs.
     
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  2. The Emperor of Mankind

    The Emperor of Mankind I poop out warp storms just coz...

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    Nice work. Very thought-provoking! :) Ha! Gaaaaaaaaaaaaay!! Heehee
     
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    Pure beauty! These words stir my soul….
     
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  4. Rival

    Rival Noachide Fundamentalist Pro-Semite
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    So I'm looking back at this poem because I was just listening to the song I wrote it to. Baruch HaShem the crazy love has gone now. It went away a while ago. I tried to write a second poem based on a dream I had of dancing with him, but I could not. I couldn't spit such a beautiful dream into human words; it simply wasn't working. I may try to write it again someday, but not today or tomorrow.

    Ah, the song was Rachem and he continues to laugh.

    :)
     
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