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Okay...this is my sappy love poem

gnomon

Well-Known Member
An inch away from the chasm...
A thousand yards away from a light.

Eyes stare down but the heart looks up
The nature of a simple plight.

Reason steps in and the mind is chaos
"What will happen to us?!"

Is it the eye?
The mind?
The heart?

I followed my heart once behind the mind
And it hurt.
I followed my eye once behind the heart
And it hurt.
The mind and the eye often betray
What is worth?

I follow the heart, alone...
Inch towards the chasm.

Because the mind and eye never saw the light
That the heart felt.......
That the horses who broke this heart open
Knew where the truth dwelt....

Follow the heart
And take the step forth...
That's where love starts
And I will find all that I'm worth...

The thousand yards become the inch
When the truth of the heart beholds
That no chasm, no distance
Our love can withhold.

And leaping that distance
Simply holding the light
My eyes and my mind
Find my hearts delight...

Your smile.

To simply see you smile.

Is the hearts delight.
 

Electra

Active Member
I may or may not be your lover but I like to reply to poems with poems... And so it is.

may I just,
place my hand on your chin, lift your head a little higher
our eyes will meet, once again
brave warrior of love
with a heart on your sleave
there will always be casualties.
each time you listen to my sweet soft voice
the clearer the trust will form
our mind, eyes and heart will form as one
as one - we gain our strength
and sweet babe
if you only saw through my eyes
you would see
your worth
can not be measured
it may be tested to only polish the stone
closer to your precious centre
to shine your light even brighter

you are so important to me
irreplaceable

in my dream you gave me a ruby red cloak
the same as yours
and took my hand
I have never felt that safe


through times hard for us both to understand
and circumstances unnerving
I have seen clues of you in my eyes
wishing and hoping you have seen mine

a distance in flesh is between us
but in my heart
I feel you
in my dreams
I see you
closer and closer
like Christmas as child
it feels so far away
then it will be close
waiting up on Christmas Eve
so exited we can not sleep
and in the morning we can (unwrap) our pressents
 
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