Merry Moron

[Master Vigil]

This is one I wrote a couple years ago, but finally shared it a few months ago. It's on BookByU.com

Merry Moron


Life Inside a merry moron,
does tell a tale to me.
Work he says that he works on,
brings up a hefty fee.
And then the many crafts create
a picture of his heart.
And from this I delineate
a work of splendid art.
I bring it to my eyes to see
the many lines of love.
And in these lines a fallacy
is said of what's above.
A moron thinks no more of me,
and I no more of him.
But in his work I plainly see
a gift set on a whim.
His fee is just I thought just then,
and in his heart it seems;
A soul beset inside of men,
does break the shell and gleam.​

 

[Storm]

Very nice.

 

[Buttons*]

I like this poem because it takes me through a "story" so to speak. I think it arrives at the place I usually find myself. I'd like to think that i sense a tinge of humor too

Thank you MV

 

[Master Vigil]

Can you tell what the Merry Moron is?

 

[Buttons*]

Can you tell what the Merry Moron is?

The first thing that came to mind was: yourself...?

 

[Master Vigil]

The first thing that came to mind was: yourself...?

Close!

 

[Master Vigil]

What type of concept would be creative, but think no more of me, as I no more of "him"?

 

[YmirGF]

I'm thinking it is the ego.

 

[Master Vigil]

I'm thinking it is the ego.

Good guess, but my ego's "fees" cannot be just.