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Indelible You

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Meow Mix, Jul 27, 2021.

  1. Meow Mix

    Meow Mix Chatte Féministe

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    I was going through the nightstand
    Some things of yours were still
    There​
    If I clear it out
    It'll just be a year
    Until I find something in there again
    Indelible​
    Like the handprints once left on walls
    But sometimes,
    These walls feel like Juliet's tomb
     
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  2. Meow Mix

    Meow Mix Chatte Féministe

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    Ok I hate the title but I like the poem, so, big shrug
     
  3. lewisnotmiller

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    Just go with 'Indelible' or perhaps 'Indelible you'?
     
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  4. Meow Mix

    Meow Mix Chatte Féministe

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    I like, but I can’t change the title on RF at least
     
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    I can. Your call though.
     
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    Indelible You please ^.^
     
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    I feel this one. Every once in a while I'll find a hair that belonged to my EX among my belongings. She had super thick hair, and it would shed and get everywhere. It ends up clumping on the insides of my hoodies and such. Whenever I find one if her hairs, memories that I don't think about anymore just come flooding in.
     
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    In this instance “going through the nightstand” was meant to be allegorical for something like conjuring memories, hence why items will always be found there later, unexpected. But I know exactly what you’re talking about; literally finding things is a thing too.
     
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    *waves magic wand*
     
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    I’ve never done poetry before RF, this is becoming a thing for me. I should save the ones that I like, see if I want to improve or change then later. Some I like the way they are
     
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    I thought it said "inedible you" and was a zombie discussion. So I guess I misread it?
     
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    It isn't?
     
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