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Geoff-Allen

Resident megalomaniac
Here is a couple of lines I have so far but ran into writer's block ... any suggestion - within reason! - would be appreciated.

Encouragement

They may not appear impressive to you
But they are doing the best they can do

Or I could just leave it as a two-line poem??

Enjoy your day!
 

Nakosis

Non-Binary Physicalist
Premium Member
Here is a couple of lines I have so far but ran into writer's block ... any suggestion - within reason! - would be appreciated.

Encouragement

They may not appear impressive to you
But they are doing the best they can do

Or I could just leave it as a two-line poem??

Enjoy your day!

I like the thought at least. :)
 

Geoff-Allen

Resident megalomaniac
I like the thought at least. :)

Yes - I suppose there are extremes that people would say surely they know better - such as criminals and others who harm their fellow beings - it can be a real challenge to say that is the best they know?

Enjoy your day!
 

SigurdReginson

Grēne Mann
Premium Member
I like the message. Maybe I'd end it with "Remember where you came from too," or something to that extent. You don't really need to add anything to get the message across, though. :)
 

Geoff-Allen

Resident megalomaniac
I like the message. Maybe I'd end it with "Remember where you came from too," or something to that extent. You don't really need to add anything to get the message across, though. :)

Thanks for the feed-back!

I suppose 2 lines could bee considered a poem but I rarely stop at 2 ... or even fifty-two :)

Ciao!
 

Geoff-Allen

Resident megalomaniac
I half-considered something about karma and how thinking unkind thoughts is just bad karma ... you may experience personal drama?

:)
 

nPeace

Veteran Member
Here is a couple of lines I have so far but ran into writer's block ... any suggestion - within reason! - would be appreciated.

Encouragement

They may not appear impressive to you
But they are doing the best they can do

Or I could just leave it as a two-line poem??

Enjoy your day!
They may not appear impressive to you
But they are doing the best they can do

Even if they seem hard to understand.
Everyone can use a little helping hand.

You may think a smile doesn't go a long way.
But try it... it may make someone's day.
[Or... But try it... it may just make their day.]

I'll stop there before I end up writing your poem.
 

Geoff-Allen

Resident megalomaniac
They may not appear impressive to you
But they are doing the best they can do

Even if they seem hard to understand.
Everyone can use a little helping hand.

You may think a smile doesn't go a long way.
But try it... it may make someone's day.
[Or... But try it... it may just make their day.]

I'll stop there before I end up writing your poem.

Thanks a bunch!

You captured the tone of my poem rather well!

I now have a few suggestions so thanks to everyone.

:)
 

stvdv

Veteran Member: I Share (not Debate) my POV
Here is a couple of lines I have so far but ran into writer's block ... any suggestion - within reason! - would be appreciated.

Encouragement

They may not appear impressive to you
But they are doing the best they can do

Or I could just leave it as a two-line poem??

Enjoy your day!
Encouragement

Poets may not appear impressive to you
But they are doing the best they can do

Some run into a, "well"..."writer's block"
A few drown ... others are just in shock
 
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