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Do you haiku? ^_^

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Deidre, Jan 2, 2015.

  1. Deidre

    Deidre Well-Known Member

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    I love haikus. Thought this could be a fun thread, for us to post some of our very own.

    Here's one of mine for now...

    Blinded by Your Light
    Closer to Hell, than Heaven
    I found my way out.



    .Look forward to some of yours. ^_^
     
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  2. JayJayDee

    JayJayDee Avid JW Bible Student

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    "God sadly watching
    As we are caught in the act
    Of being ourselves.

    Love Haiku! [​IMG]
     
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    JayJayDee Avid JW Bible Student

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    First light at daybreak
    Skeins of Ibis heading south
    Thinking of breakfast
     
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  4. Deidre

    Deidre Well-Known Member

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    Ok. I just love that! ^_^
    TY for sharing it.
     
  5. JayJayDee

    JayJayDee Avid JW Bible Student

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    He he he ...don't get me started.....:D
     
  6. Deidre

    Deidre Well-Known Member

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    Karma

    Karma is a place
    Where we will all pay the price
    Of our actions...now

    The Light

    Was once lost in faith
    But the Light above, shines through
    I can't see god's face...

    This one, I wrote for my recent ex bf:

    Movement, soft and slow
    Grinding to a crescendo
    Basking in the glow...
     
  7. JayJayDee

    JayJayDee Avid JW Bible Student

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    Stopped at the red light
    A great haiku comes to mind
    No pen or paper :eek:
     
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    JayJayDee Avid JW Bible Student

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    Counting my treasures
    Who I love, not what I own
    Rich beyond measure
     
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    JayJayDee Avid JW Bible Student

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    With squeals and laughter
    Children playing in the yard
    Unscripted theatre
     
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  10. Deidre

    Deidre Well-Known Member

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    She was a light beam
    The greatest love I have known
    I wish she was here.
     
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  11. dust1n

    dust1n Zindīq

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    I've never written
    A haiku, and never will.
    I simply refuse.
     
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  12. Deidre

    Deidre Well-Known Member

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    You should consider
    Haiku writing, it is fun
    I see what you did
    :D
     
  13. JayJayDee

    JayJayDee Avid JW Bible Student

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    When my father died
    The whole world came to a stop
    The earth kept spinning
     
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  14. dust1n

    dust1n Zindīq

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    I'm sorry, but I
    Could never bring myself to
    Futile action.
     
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  15. Deidre

    Deidre Well-Known Member

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    You did it again.
    Writing haikus is fun, yes?
    Don't try to hide it.

    ^_^
     
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    dust1n Zindīq

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    The day that I write
    A haiku, will also be the
    Day I take my life.
     
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  17. dust1n

    dust1n Zindīq

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    Woke up this morning.
    Told myself I'm committed.
    Will not write haikus!
     
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  18. Deidre

    Deidre Well-Known Member

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    Here we go again
    Committing to not haiku
    You should try harder
    :p
     
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    Here is the confused
    Relating to a haiku:
    Five, seven, five ain't.
     
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  20. Deidre

    Deidre Well-Known Member

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    Even more haiku
    I'm happy to see this
    My day is complete
     
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