Ha! I'm not quite suggesting I have the answers. More that actively considering it in designing coursework, and in particular homework, allows mitigation strategies to be put into place. Without too much of thought, this might include;
1) Use of GPTZero or similar tools to try and detect AI developed outputs.
2) Requirement of drafting works to be shown where development of a long text (eg. narrative writing) is being done.\
3) Requirement to present views on essays previously written in an oral setting without having the essay in front of you, but having access to your own handwritten cheat sheets or notes.
4) Increased use of in class assessment, as opposed to homework.
And I don't quite get why you provided the two essays. What point are you trying to make with them? (Sorry if I'm missing something obvious.)
Just playing, really. A more fun example I just did with my daughter in trying to show her how it works was to say to ChatGPT 'Give me a good recipe for pancakes which includes choc chips.' It gave me one, including ingredients and method. I then said 'I forgot to tell you I'm allergic to eggs'. It apologized for not checking dietary requirements, and then gave me a new recipe, which excluded eggs. It's entirely possible to throw together a quick result, then add more details and get a more refined result.
Btw, if I were a university English teacher, I'd assign an A to a student who handed such an essay in to my English 101 class, but a C or D to a graduate student. But I suppose such a simple prompt would never be given to a graduate student in the first place.
Yup, that's fair, and I think you're being generous. But my daughter (Year 7 student) was pretty impressed by the 750 word essay on the perils of social media I just generated in 30 seconds, and was pretty sure she'd get an A. Particularly when I regenerated it, and asked it to use Pew Research plus an Australian example and it did so.
The thing is, when I was in school, I NEEDED time to write a proper essay. My first drafts were trash (and often ended up in the trash can). But, given time, I was able to produce papers that scored 99-100%. What about THOSE students whose ability to craft good essays depends on skillful revision and multiple attempts? It seems like giving 45 minutes in-class to write an essay is going to make some students look like bogus writers when in fact they need time to sculpt their work.
I think this is a good point. I would say simply that ChatGPT should be considered in working out how to assign assessments. It might be as simple as saying 'Hey so don't throw out your drafts...submit them along with your finished product.'
Then you have more of a drama with the kid who punches things out on the first try, but THAT kid I should be able to see better evidenced in class.
I'm not suggesting I have a great answer, but the first step is to consider things actively, instead of ignoring them. (Not suggesting you're ignoring them...I know some schools here are at this point.)