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A poem made of suicide notes

VoidCat

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This is a poem made entirely of lines from suicide notes I myself have written over the years. Currently am not suicidal but thought I'd write a poem from suicide notes. Tagging: @Guitar's Cry


Title: Suicide note
If demons are fallen angels then it must be poetic to fall from a great height
Deep beneath the waves I've tried to keep my head up.
But no matter how loud I screamed no one would listen
Dreams are an escape.
Death is like sleep.
I remember cuddling with her and her smile.
I hope she liked my notebook of poems,
Tho she did not know why I said I did not need them.
Pain is a bit like love,
You don't realize how much you can feel at once.
God, I hope will comfort you.
I laugh at my own pain
For I cannot face how much im in.
It started to hit that block began to fall
And now I wonder if I'm sane?
I warned all of you
I told you my thoughts
But y'all just said im an attention seeker.
If there is a God
Then may he punish me for the pain I've caused.
All I've wanted was peace.
All I wanted was compassion.
To my sis im sorry,
I promised and now the waves take me.
If demons are fallen angels,
Then what does it say that I relate?
 
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Guitar's Cry

Disciple of Pan
This is a poem made entirely of lines from suicide notes I myself have written over the years. Currently am not suicidal but thought I'd write a poem from suicide notes. Tagging: @Guitar's Cry


Title: Suicide note
If demons are fallen angels then it must be poetic to fall from a great height
Deep beneath the waves I've tried to keep my head up.
But no matter how loud I screamed no one would listen
Dreams are an escape.
Death is like sleep.
I remember cuddling with her and her smile.
I hope she liked my notebook of poems,
Tho she did not know why I said I did not need them.
Pain is a bit like love,
You don't realize how much you can feel at once.
God, I hope will comfort you.
I laugh at my own pain
For I cannot face how much im in.
It started to hit that block began to fall
And now I wonder if I'm sane?
I warned all of you
I told you my thoughts
But y'all just said im an attention seeker.
If there is a God
Then may he punish me for the pain I've caused.
All I've wanted was peace.
All I wanted was compassion.
To my sis im sorry,
I promised and now the waves take me.
If demons are fallen angels,
Then what does it say that I relate?

Powerful lines! I think this is my favorite poem of yours...
 
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