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One, two, three

Mystic-als

Active Member
Take time. Don’t rush. Why.
All the time in the world.
Selfish. Want to much
To much attention.
One, two, three.
But still none to look at. Where as I am one.
Four, five, How long must I survive. Why.
Rush. Some Time.
None to talk to.
No smile.
Selfish. Sulking. Searching.
Wanting. But None.
Childish.
Finally! Beauty. Smile. Touch. Love. Attention.
But still none.
No time. :(
 

Mystic-als

Active Member
I know this one is a little (understatement) disjointed.
First tell me what you think and then I'll tell you what it's about. But I know it's not anywhere near my best. It was just a "doodle".
 

Sunstone

De Diablo Del Fora
Premium Member
Doodles are fine. Better than fine because we must all experiment.

I like the line: " Selfish. Sulking. Searching." best. Love both the meaning of the words and their sound and rhythm.
 

Mystic-als

Active Member
Well. I took a long break from this forum. But I think I'll give it a crack again. As you can see this and my other poetry is very very old. I'll try come up with something new. :)
 
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