My own poem (devil)

[mrscardero]

Held

I held him in my arms
I felt the tears
fall upon my cheeks
The sounds around me
began to fade
as the perspectives
around me began
to turn black

All I could do is sit there
Thinking about the past
Thinking about the present
Thinking about the future

All I could do was sit there
Holding him in my arms
Understanding and knowing
right there and then.

I held him in my arms
as I start to sence
his heart beat fade
As I look at his gentle face
He takes his last breath

I held him in my arms
For the last time
Our son will always be
Our endless son

[Druidus]

That's a good poem, with great imagery! I like it!

Not to be rude, though, but I just started the same topic as this in the same board.

[mrscardero]

Originally Posted by Druidus

That's a good poem, with great imagery! I like it!

Not to be rude, though, but I just started the same topic as this in the same board.

Ugh...see what happens when you don't get enough sleep. You read posts and they don't make sense to me...lol . I thought your post was just about poems and not your own...Ok...How do you close this thread?

For those who are reading this, please go to Druids post about Poetry...Thank You Druid. back atcha!

[Druidus]

I don't think you can close it, but a mod will gladly do it. By the way, ifd any mod reads this, do you want to merge these two, instead of closing this one?

[mrscardero]

If we merge our companies together, will we make more money?

How do we merge? I think we should just put a sign on the door of this thread and say...Original thread will be found at: Poetry posted by Druid.