Open for Interpretation (hell, POV, Almighty)

[Mustard Seed]

Hello everyone, I wanted to post a poem here and get opinions on it. was it good or bad? Did you understand it or what is your interpretation of it? I have not had many people read my writings, so it would be great to hear others reviews. I have not written anything in a long time and am considering starting back up....I will post another one for review aswell and thanks in advance for anyone's help. darnell

freedom

meeting of steel
against steel trapped
as a bird prisoner of
poverty nothing but
hopelessness in a small
world of sorrow and grief

freedom long gone
hate hit's eyes of
anger nostril's flaring
muscles trembling dark
half's moving one thought
of getting even...

pain shows lashing
on captor's who pass
judgement not knowing
soul's lurk behind pleading
God promises of change
meaningless in thy words

if pain is deepened enough
forgivness is asked which
should be given cause
that is the way of
almighty that is only
if deserved...

consideration should be
taken at heart by you
to men and women who
see no sun poor
soul's cast into thier
own living hell