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Take time. Don’t rush. Why.
All the time in the world. Selfish. Want to much To much attention. One, two, three. But still none to look at. Where as I am one. Four, five, How long must I survive. Why. Rush. Some Time. None to talk to. No smile. Selfish. Sulking. Searching. Wanting. But None. Childish. Finally! Beauty. Smile. Touch. Love. Attention. But still none. No time. ![]()
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I know this one is a little (understatement) disjointed.
First tell me what you think and then I'll tell you what it's about. But I know it's not anywhere near my best. It was just a "doodle".
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Doodles are fine. Better than fine because we must all experiment.
I like the line: " Selfish. Sulking. Searching." best. Love both the meaning of the words and their sound and rhythm.
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Then I came back from where I'd been. My room, it looked the same - but there was nothing left between The Nameless and the name. - Leonard Cohen. |