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06-10-2006, 05:40 PM
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You know my soul but you don't do the dishes
From the moment we met we've been engaged
Now you know my mood when I walk into the room You've been beside me from now till then You know my soul But you don't do the dishes You will never speak to me But I like the silence - When you look into my eyes, There's a connection that I can't describe But I've never seen you wash the clothes - You won't mow the lawn And you never even brush your teeth I can't get you away from the games - I can't get into your mind In spite of all this, your still a good dog.
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06-10-2006, 05:42 PM
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"Scully, one of these days, we're going to look back on this moment and laugh." - Fox
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06-10-2006, 08:01 PM
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LOL! Congratulations! I completely did not expect the last line!
I think the poem works. I felt the sense of connectedness.
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Then I came back from where I'd been. My room, it looked the same - but there was nothing left between The Nameless and the name. - Leonard Cohen.
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I think it's fabulous, absolutely brilliant.
Will work for Frubals
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