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The think dark fog descends to cloud my mind
my eyes grow tired and dim; I feel my feet drag through slimy sludge, I cannot move..... That dreadful harsh unyielding coldness claims my heart I feel no more........'tis as if the time has stopped and nothing works no more. I'm in that pit that has such depth that no one can conceive.....there's no more light my brain is numb suspended somehow in the speeding world and I can't walk, I cannot move, I cannot speak....... for hell's dark black has come again to cloud my mind I know its time, but how long for ? Till out of pit I might just find a way. The agony of knowing I do not want to be...... but I must be, am not allowed to leave the stage for I must suffer dull dark ache of everything of which I'm made 'till pain is all around, a blissful sea of red the shackles of my being tied fast to dark dank Earth Did someone speak? I heard a noise.......... or was it grinding of my bones, as grate they do with black and fiery spasmic fun till my head is done......... and lo, I fall to floor...... without the will to stand up yet again to find the top of that fouled pit in which I'm there just once again............... I know that pit, I know the smell, I hear the screams, I love my pit of deep depressive hell......
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very dark... very good. Nicely done.
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