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Old 05-04-2012, 01:35 PM
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Every survivor has a personal theory as to why the dead walk. Maria, a practitioner of modern Voodoo, believes that magic is both the impetus and the remedy. Will Maria’s magic be enough to control (or at the least, turn) the walking dead?

I like your summary; it's interesting and draws readers in, but as an editor, I couldn't help but tweak it. It's funny how editors hate to see passive voice, a missed comma or a misspelled word. I would have changed the last sentence, but I didn't want to go overboard.

Overall, I like it, your premise and your original post.
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Well, I am trying to figure out what the connection is between Wicca and Zombies. You would do better researching forms of necromancy.
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Ok folks, if you want to see the how it turned out, the ritual is in Episode 2.

Watch projectz episodes on Blip

The director was going for a 1950's horror film feel and I think the final product is pretty good. I thought the kids doing the ritual did a great job too.

Enjoy
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