|
| Welcome to Religious Forums |
| Welcome Guest to ReligiousForums.com . You are currently not registered. When you become registered you will be able to interact with our large base of already registered users discussing topics. Some annoying Ads will also disappear when you register. Registering doesn't cost a thing and only takes a few seconds. We provide areas to chat and debate all World Religions. Please go to our register page! |
|
|||||||
 |
|
|
Thread Tools | Display Modes |
|
#1
10-31-2005, 08:29 AM
|
||||
|
||||
My Poem
Hi all, just thought I would share with you one of my many talents My poetry LOL !!!!!!...It was the first one I got published
....Sometimes sometimes i wonder how did this all start sometimes i wonder why you broke my heart sometimes i feel my lifes at a halt the tears that i cried where you worth their salt,, sometimes i wonder when i lay in bed sometimes i wonder and wish i were dead,, sometimes i wonder was this all real do you know how laugh how to cry how to feel sometimes i wonder where your at now did i ever hurt you,tell me why when and how sometimes i wonder why you wont come clean sometimes i wonder why you treat me so mean sometimes i wonder why its you that i miss the warmth of your smile and your tender kiss sometimes i wonder will the hurt ever die sometimes i wonder why you leave me to cry sometimes i wonder why my lifes in a mess,, is it because i still love you, then my answer is yes, Jacqueline Griffin Copyright ©2005 Jacqueline Griffin
__________________
Dear God, Lead me to some soul Today.. 
|
|
#2
10-31-2005, 08:38 AM
|
||||
|
||||
|
This was dedicated to my friend's baby who was stillborn...
Still Yet Born in memory of baby john As I look down from heaven this is what I see i see all your sadness and its all because of me As I look down from heaven i see a place where you stand a lock of my hair you cup in your hand As I look down from heaven you could never have known the love you sent to me in the place i was growing As I look down from heaven i will never forget the lullabyes sang to me though we hadnt met As I look down from heaven I need you to know mummy you are the best, hear what I say for its just for a while but for now its in Gods arms I rest. Jacqueline Griffin Copyright ©2005 Jacqueline Griffin
__________________
Dear God, Lead me to some soul Today..
|
|
#3
10-31-2005, 10:05 AM
|
||||
|
||||
|
Quote:
Had me really tearful Terry__________________________ Blessed are the pure of heart, they shall behold their God.
|
|
#4
10-31-2005, 10:29 AM
|
||||
|
||||
|
Thankyou Terry, when my friend lost her son, the hospital gave her a lock of his hair, also his photo and foot and hand prints, I put everything together for her in a frame which she cherishes...It was so sad for her...
__________________
Dear God, Lead me to some soul Today..
|
|
#5
10-31-2005, 10:38 AM
|
||||
|
||||
|
That really touched my heart. Very lovely! Well done!
__________________
Forever? But that's a lifetime away! 
|
|
#6
10-31-2005, 10:46 AM
|
||||
|
||||
|
They were both wonderfully touching, Jackie; the second one brought a tear or two, as Terry said. You write beautifully.
__________________
My life is an open book; if you don't like the read, put me back on the shelf ....................
|
|
#7
10-31-2005, 10:49 AM
|
||||
|
||||
|
AWWWWW, Thankyou all for your kind words..
__________________
Dear God, Lead me to some soul Today..
|
|
#8
10-31-2005, 11:13 AM
|
||||
|
||||
|
Lovely writing!
Out of curiosity, where did you have your poems published?
__________________
The World is a book, and those who do not travel read only a page. ~Saint Augustine~
|
|
#9
11-01-2005, 04:06 AM
|
||||
|
||||
|
Quote:
__________________
Dear God, Lead me to some soul Today..
|
|
#10
11-01-2005, 12:45 PM
|
||||
|
||||
|
Wow... both expose your soul so exquisitely!
__________________
On sabbatical until things become fun again.
Reach me at NetDoc@ScubaBoard.com or on www.ScubaBoard.com.
|
