How do you like my poem, "Adonai (God), my belonging"?

[PrestonM]

While you come so near I come so far,
Romance me, my Adonai, show me Who You are.
Allow me to experience Your eloquent Glory and Grace,
Hide not from me the Power in Your Righteous Face.
There is none like You, my God, my buckler-my shield,
Greater is my belonging to You then any other sheep
Of the field.
The journey, as well as, my love for You is Timeless, this
Much, I know,
Nevertheless, in my travel I can not be lost because
You're everywhere I try to go.

I love You, my God, my Lord.

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Thank you.

[wlkngwthgod]

Very Good!!!!!!

[PrestonM]

Thank you, wlkngwthgod. I enjoy your comment.


Sincerely,
PrestonM